Personally, this is quite beautiful in its simplicity. It makes the audience think about what it maybe or what it reminds them of. I see Earth with birds and planes flying over. Haha, it is nice to see the hidden images that are done by an artist. You have given us all an interesting thing to ponder. An the white space is wonderful as it seems like most artists forget its importance in drawing attention. You are very creative when it comes to shapes and motion. I would attempt to make some of the lines a little bit cleaner if you can. Overall, you did a great job on this piece.